HARRY POTTER ROCKZ!!!
Harry Potter Deathly Hallows Part 2 is coming up. You know what this means.....
More fanfictions!!!!
But I Hate people who completely change a character of a person! Like this extract
{Voldemort stared at the table of people, "I WANT HARRY POTTER" he screamed, "DO YOU GET IT"}
That is so out of character, who ever heard of voldemort screaming? Puh leese!!!
And there where even horribler ones where voldemort was reported to have giggled or even have feelings.
these extract, i shall not defoul my page by putting them on here.
Any way, as I was saying, people ought take have the character of character captured exactly, you CANNOT change a characteristic of a character, see, the characteristics create a character. Let's say I have this text {{X stared at everyone around him, he said in his high cold voice " I want Harry Potter." he paused for a minute, surveying the effect his words had on his minions. A lot of them shivered. Good! He closed his red eyes for a second or so..}}
If i Replaced X with voldemort, it is belivable, or if i askeed you who X was, Voldemort. Any other fanfiction should be run through this test to ..test its adherence to the character.
More fanfictions!!!!
But I Hate people who completely change a character of a person! Like this extract
{Voldemort stared at the table of people, "I WANT HARRY POTTER" he screamed, "DO YOU GET IT"}
That is so out of character, who ever heard of voldemort screaming? Puh leese!!!
And there where even horribler ones where voldemort was reported to have giggled or even have feelings.
these extract, i shall not defoul my page by putting them on here.
Any way, as I was saying, people ought take have the character of character captured exactly, you CANNOT change a characteristic of a character, see, the characteristics create a character. Let's say I have this text {{X stared at everyone around him, he said in his high cold voice " I want Harry Potter." he paused for a minute, surveying the effect his words had on his minions. A lot of them shivered. Good! He closed his red eyes for a second or so..}}
If i Replaced X with voldemort, it is belivable, or if i askeed you who X was, Voldemort. Any other fanfiction should be run through this test to ..test its adherence to the character.
